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clex_monkie89 ([personal profile] clex_monkie89) wrote2006-08-07 11:20 pm

[Fic] (Supernatural) Three Snippets.

Special thanks go to [livejournal.com profile] halfshellvenus, without whom's help these would never be seen. Because I suck with the titles and she rules like ruling with them.

Title: It Comes At A Price
Rating: PG
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Characters: Sam
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Words: 421
Summary: That which does not kill you...



When Sam arrived at Stanford he had: six ribs in varying degrees of broken and healing, a black eye, a split lip, and torn, bloody knuckles ending in equally broken fingers.

Exactly how Sam got these injuries is a favored betting pool among his friends. Theories include everything from him being attacked by rogue ninjas to getting in a drunken brawl to getting the snot kicked out of him by a twelve-year old girl scout.

Sam's friends are under the mistaken assumption that they are funny. They are also under the mistaken assumption that all of these injuries were received at the same time.

The truth he'll never tell is this.

Sam, Dean and John were in Idaho chasing after this ass-wang ("Shut up Dean, it's pronounced oz-wine-g.") when he got tackled out a second story window. He pinched enough nerves and bruised his spine bad enough to be paralyzed from the chest down for almost three weeks. The only thing that kept his neck from snapping like a twig was him bracing himself by curling before he hit the pavement.

That's how he broke his ribs.

The black eye was caused by Dean throwing an elbow in his sleep and catching Sam in the eye. No fighting, no anger, no purpose at all, just an older brother with an arm cramp.

The split lip was also caused by Dean, but this time it was caused by a fist and was done on purpose. It happened the day Sam left for Stanford, which just happened to be the same day he told them about it. He and John had their big fight and he stormed out. Dean found him like he always does and tried to "talk some sense into him."

Twenty minutes of bitching, eight minutes of yelling and one incredibly stupid instance on Sam's part of saying something bad about John later and Sam had two loose teeth, a headache and a split lip. Dean didn't offer to drive Sam to the Greyhound station and Sam didn't beg for Dean to understand.

The knuckles and fingers came next.

Sam managed to navigate his way to the Greyhound by city bus and arrive with forty-five minutes to spare before his bus left.

Sam spent his first half-hour beating his fists into the painted brick wall of the bathroom, only stopping when both hands were numb and the wall was red with his blood, and then spent his last fifteen minutes crying and sobbing like he hadn't since he was six.



Title: The Beast Within
Rating: PG
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Characters: Sam, Dean
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Words: 300
Summary: Werewolves.



Sam hates the werewolves the most.

It's not the werewolves themselves that he hates; it's the fact that all but three days of a month they are completely and utterly human. Human as Dean, human as Dad, human as the pretty girl with braces in his fourth third grade class, the one in Tulsa.

Sam had nightmares for the better part of five years after killing her. He was eight and she had just turned nine. It was his first kill and he cried for three days after watching the hairy, slobbering wolf that had it jaws clamped down on his brother shift and slide into Cynthia. Nice, pretty Cynthia who smiled at him and didn't make fun of him and once had long brown hair and an intact skull.

Sam remembers Dean holding him in the car on the way back to the room. He also remembers falling asleep on his father's lap, still crying.

One time, Dean got attacked by a werewolf because they always go straight for him and Sam thought he was dead. He vividly remembers seeing it swipe its huge paw across his brother's stomach and watching the blood just fall out onto the basketball court followed by shredded muscle and what looked dangerously like intestine.

Sam was fourteen. He emptied his entire magazine in the thing's head and chest. Eleven silver bullets, three of which were shot into the bastard even after he was already dead and human again.

When Sam thinks of terror, he thinks of his arm shoved in his brother's stomach, stuttery, shallow breaths, Dean's bloody mouth and his glassy eyed stare at nothing.

To this day Sam doesn't know what sickened him more, Dean's gaping abdominal wound or the sickening satisfaction he felt pumping the werewolf/man full of deadly silver.



Title: Twinkie Fondling For The Symbolically Impaired
Rating: R
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Characters: Sam, Dean
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Words: 216
Summary: All's fair in love and war.



"Dude."

"What?"

"Tell me that's not my Twinkie."

"It's not your Twinkie. It's my Twinkie."

"Dude. Don't fondle my food."

"It's not your food; I found it."

"I bought it."

"You stole it."

"Yeah, me. Which makes that mine."

Crumple, crumple.

"You didn't just do that."

"Mmpmph ah wiw."

"I can't believe you just did that. You fucking bastard, you couldn't've saved me any?"

"Woe."

"You're never going to get laid again. Seriously, you're gonna have to fuck yourself from now on."

"Mmm. It was so good Dean. Just like a little piece of heaven, wrapped up in love and safely secured in a thin plastic sheath."

"Dude. You are so gay."

"Says the guy who had his cock rammed up my ass last night."

Shift.

"So that's how it's gonna be, huh? Well you were the one whimpering and begging, not me. Harder Dean, please! Harder! Fuck me harder!"

Shift.

"I don't sound like that."

"Of course not, I can't make my voice crack the way yours does when, how did you say it? Right. When I have my cock rammed up your ass."

Groan.

"Pull over."

"No."

"What?"

"You heard me. No. You stole my last Twinkie bitch; prepare to feel my wrath."

"..."

"Or, you know, not feel it."

"Worst big brother ever."
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[identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 06:44 am (UTC)(link)
the first two break my heart and the last one just made me giggle. they're such BROTHERS in that one. well, they are in the first and second ones too, but twinkies must bring out the immature ten-year-old in everyone. so cute. ^_^

but the second one, what is it with sam and all the darkness lately? the sickening satisfaction he felt pumping the werewolf/man full of deadly silver. if he ever does kill a human being, it will be in defense of his brother, or revenge for something done to him. no question, that'll do it - fear of losing dean.

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 06:58 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you liked these! Twinkies always bring out the immature ten-year-old in everyone. It's a fact.

And yes, Sam would totally take that step into darkness for Dean, just like Dean does for him. There's something about dark!Sam that's just so... Interesting.

[identity profile] mooyoo.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 06:55 am (UTC)(link)
Eeee! Love. Especially the first. Especially especially Dean elbowing Sam in his sleep, for some reason. Love the simplicity and randomness of the injury.

Dean didn't offer to drive Sam to the Greyhound station and Sam didn't beg for Dean to understand.

Mmm, very against many fics that address this period, and I can totally see it.

"Dude. You are so gay."

"Says the guy who had his cock rammed up my ass last night."


*laughs* Love this one. So very brothers (who fuck).

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 07:10 am (UTC)(link)
Eeee! Love.

Thank you!

Especially the first. Especially especially Dean elbowing Sam in his sleep, for some reason. Love the simplicity and randomness of the injury.

There's just something about such a normal, run-of-the-mill injury on them that's interesting. Like Dean breaking his arm falling oout of a tree or Sam getting his nose broken just goofing around with Dean.

Mmm, very against many fics that address this period, and I can totally see it.

It's totally my canon. I love the fics where Dean drives him to the bus or to Stanford but they just don't seem real. Dean does not strike me as the guy who would do that, to him it would feel like giving his blessing and he just can't so that. Yeah, I see him slipping Sammy some money and hiding useful things in his bags but for the most part he would just inoring him and it.

*laughs* Love this one. So very brothers (who fuck).

Thank you, I just love the thought that they're still them. Yeah there's sex but they aren't all with the mushy and declarations of love suddenly, they're still complete boys.

[identity profile] veradeath.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 07:32 am (UTC)(link)
Its amazing how much of a punch these snippents really pack.

All angsty and dark and then fluffy near-porn.

Nice.

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 07:35 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed these!

[identity profile] veradeath.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 07:37 am (UTC)(link)
Welcome.

These have made think thinkyity thoughts re: Sammich's going to the Dark Side of the Force. And college!Sammich.

And the twinkies made me laugh.

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 07:48 am (UTC)(link)
I have these thing with college!Sammich now, it's just trying to sneak into my brain lately...

And I'm glad the twinkies made you laugh! :D

[identity profile] veradeath.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 07:50 am (UTC)(link)
I do hope so, as I like college!Sammich.

Hee.

[identity profile] deadflowerss.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 07:39 am (UTC)(link)
These are al amazing,the first was so sad...The third was so funny.
You have their characteriations and voices spot on.
Fantastic!

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 07:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked these and am thrilled that you think I have their voices.

[identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
Aww! Aww! and Hee!

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 07:54 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked them, thank you for commenting!

[identity profile] missyjack.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 01:11 pm (UTC)(link)
totally love these.
#1 because the injuries coming from such different events is an indication of how complex Sam's life was and i bet the teasing (rogue ninjas *g*)reminded him of dean. And of course they all sustained emotional injuries at this time.
#2 coz wee!Sam had to deal with so much so young. And I think one of my grade three classmates was a werewolf.
#3 snarky twinkie!porn. nuff said.

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-08-09 11:08 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed these!

And? I totally think I've had a werewolf or two in classes with me...
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[personal profile] tabaqui 2006-08-08 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Heeeeeeee! Twinkie fondling.

And *sniffle* coming of age and into the realization that killing feels good, somtimes.

And hurts. *sniffle*
Good, good stuff.

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-08-09 11:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I'm very glad you enjoyed this!

[identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Still like 'em.

Exactly how Sam got these injuries is a favored betting pool among his friends. Theories include everything from him being attacked by rogue ninjas to getting in a drunken brawl to getting the snot kicked out of him by a twelve-year old girl scout.
Sam's friends are under the mistaken assumption that they are funny.

God, aren't they just always? And I love that the injuries are from unrelated incidents-- one of theme even an accident.

#2 just hurts. And #3 is so freakin' bizarre.

Dude, where's my credit? :0 :D Hee!

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-08-11 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
Dude, where's my credit? :0 :D Hee!

Dude. I totally spazzed on that, fixed now. :P

[identity profile] ekopi.livejournal.com 2006-08-11 08:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, man. The first one is just, ow. I've re-read it about five times and still am barely coherent about why I love it so much. XP There's something that just fits about that kind of violence invading Sam's life at college, like he didn't really get to leave at all. I love how it's snide and funny but still just that much angry.
The second one, too. That Sam can order his life by werewolf deaths and have it make sense - it makes me want to be all emo with him. :(
The last one is great, the title especially. It feels a lot like "Hell House", all immature and sibling-ish. =D
Thank you so much for posting these. I stumbled here through links of links of links, so I hope I'm not interrupting or anything.

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-08-27 04:49 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. Pardon the response time, Yahoo doesn't seem to be liking LJ much apparently.

I am very glad that you enjoyed these and I thank you for commenting! And don't feel like you're interrupting, it's all good.

[identity profile] amanofmydreams.livejournal.com 2006-12-13 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
lmao! the last one is fantastic! it shows how much they really are one another brothers!
"You heard me. No. You stole my last Twinkie bitch; prepare to feel my wrath."

"..."

"Or, you know, not feel it."


hahahaha! TOO SWEET!

awww, poor sammy watching dean die....

now, that one sounds like something that would happen with the family. I can so see younger Dean kicking Sam ass for leaving him, and Sam being all Emo and mangling his fist! Great work!

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-12-13 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
the last one is fantastic! it shows how much they really are one another brothers!

Thank you! I love just how much they're boys and brothers and friends above everything.

awww, poor sammy watching dean die....

Poor Sammich. :(

I can so see younger Dean kicking Sam ass for leaving him, and Sam being all Emo and mangling his fist! Great work!

Thank you!

[identity profile] amanofmydreams.livejournal.com 2006-12-13 07:32 pm (UTC)(link)
mawaah! I love my comments! LMAO

[identity profile] morbidmuse.livejournal.com 2007-01-27 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. Brilliant. All of the sections are great but I especially love the first. It just feels so... right. So true. Great job with it. *saves to memories*

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2007-01-29 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed these, especially the first one!

[identity profile] elektrik-storm.livejournal.com 2007-06-06 10:49 am (UTC)(link)
what an emotional rollercoaster! *sigh*

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2007-06-06 11:08 am (UTC)(link)
But it's a fun rollercoaster, eh? :P

[identity profile] elektrik-storm.livejournal.com 2007-06-06 11:37 am (UTC)(link)
it was very fun! didn't go upside down thank god! :P
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[identity profile] velvetine01.livejournal.com 2007-07-01 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
they were all splendid! oh, how i do love dean's bitchiness! but he'll cave in eventually. i mean, it was just a twinkie!

and wee!sam in #2 was so hurty. gah, so beautiful and vivid!

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Dean won't have to cave, Sam'll give in and start begging for it.

Thank you so much!

[identity profile] gilesgirl.livejournal.com 2008-07-15 05:15 am (UTC)(link)
LOL!

Awww, these are GREAT!! I'm going down the list of your SPN fic & loving it ALL!

Hee, Twinkies. ;D

[identity profile] gilesgirl.livejournal.com 2008-09-12 07:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I love to leave comments! ♥ :)

[identity profile] masja-17.livejournal.com 2012-09-25 06:45 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, sweet and you got the brothers sooo right!

<3