Hi :) I just finished reading this and I loved it! And you really wrote it out of order? I found that the story really flowed and made complete sense. I love your Jess. She's weird and unique and I like how this story was written in three different point of views. Though, the two most prominent were Jess and Dean. You had a whole bunch of details and I really like that kind of thing to read. It makes it so much more interesting! Gosh, lol. But the ending was very abrupt; kind of like there's more to the story but suddenly stopped. I hope there'll be more! :( *wibbly lip and teary eyes* I don't think anyone's ever written an AU where Jess joins them. Anyway, great job. :D
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