clex_monkie89: Close-cropped picture of Sam and Dean Winchester sitting far closer than normal people. (SPN - Quiet - SamandDean)
clex_monkie89 ([personal profile] clex_monkie89) wrote2006-11-25 09:56 am

[Fic] Samson (Supernatural)

Title: Samson
Rating: G
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Characters: Sam, Dean, John.
Pairing: Sam/Dean (Light)
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Words: 849
Summary: Dean gives Sam a haircut.



Sam holds his breath and tries not to squirm as a shiver rolls down his spine. The hum of the clippers is loud in his ear and the roof of his mouth tingles when they touch his skull.

"Hold still," Dean tells him before tilting his head further to the side. A strong breath of air blows the stray pieces of loose hair into the chilly Nevada night. Dean's hand follows soon after, brushing through the new fuzz while knocking away the stubborn strands.

Sam's throat clears as he tries to cover the low groan he can’t help but make. He feels Dean’s huff of laughter on the back of his neck and clears his throat again, louder this time.

“Forward,” Dean instructs him and Sam lowers his head. The tingling feeling in his mouth spreads to his throat as Dean shaves another stripe.

Sam’s enthralled by the way the blood-matted hair just drops past his bare legs and collects at his feet while the clean hair flutters, catching on invisible wind and scattering.

Sam and Dean both suck in breaths through their noses when the clippers catch on a scab. The clippers touch and go around the edge of the scab lightly, removing the hair while trying not to rip off the dried blood.

“Back.”

Sam lets his head drop backwards and his eyes slide shut. If he breathes evenly, he can hear the shower still running - his father’s probably still cleaning his own wounds - and Dean’s humming something softly and off-key under his breath.

A car backfires somewhere in the parking lot and Sam jumps slightly, just enough for the clippers to sting a little as they bite into soft flesh. Dean’s thumb swipes over the razor-burnt skin and Sam allows his head to loll slightly, resting it against his brother’s careful hands.

They stay like that for a moment, silent and touching carelessly, before Dean goes back to his job.

“Left. Your other left, Sam.” Sam resists, as always, the urge to crack his neck when forced at this awkward angle, ear nearly flat against his shoulder. Dean’s fingers push and press and fold Sam’s right ear as he rids Sam of his sideburns and all the other hair around it.

Dean does one more pass all over his shorn head to make sure all of Sam’s fuzz is the same length, that there are no patches of inch-long hair or bald spots hiding from Dean’s sight.

Cool bursts of air trail warm hands down Sam’s neck, shoulders, back and chest. Stray hair tickles and flutters as Dean brushes them off Sam’s naked flesh; Sam tries to clear his thoughts while he brushes away the hair clinging to his shorts.

Dean’s hands flutter down Sam’s back lightly and Sam tries, and fails, not to still. His muscles tighten and heat floods his body, he can feel his stomach start to shake in that familiar and slightly uncomfortable way.

Sam works his throat and jaw, trying to get rid of the cottony, clammy feeling in his mouth. He leans forward with the pretense of brushing stray hairs off his scalp and it backfires horribly. Dean’s hands are there in a second, running over his scalp and rubbing lightly.

Sam’s tired, and cold. His body aches and his muscles are sore. He lets his head drop forward and doesn’t even try to cover the moan that slips out. Sam squeezes his eyes closed and his breathes come out in harsh pants as Dean’s fingers start to rub harder.

Sam ignores the sharp feeling of shame that hits him when he arches his head back and exposes the line of his neck. Sam’s hands grip his thighs and his heart pounds in his chest as Dean’s hands slip down.

“Dean,” Sam whispers quietly as Dean’s thumb traces the underside of his jaw. Sam licks his lips and hears his brother make some kind of whimpering sound. With his eyes still closed, he nudges his mouth upwards and his lips meet his brother’s.

The sound of the bathroom door opening is like a bucket of ice water dumped directly in his lap. In an instant, Dean is gone. Sam looks behind him and sees him backing away until his back hits the doorjamb leading into the room. His eyes are wild, scared, and his hands are shaking lightly at his sides.

The blood is still roaring in Sam’s ears when he hears his father’s voice. Dean’s entire demeanor changes and he answers back to whatever their father has just said. Dean doesn’t look at Sam when he picks the clippers back up and walks into the room.

The shame and disgust and self-loathing hit Sam like a fist to the stomach.

Sam leans forward and counts to a thousand.

By two hundred and nineteen, he’s good enough to move. He walks into their room, nods in his father’s general direction and climbs right into bed. He desperately wishes that he’ll be asleep by the time Dean’s done with his shower and secretly hopes that he’ll still be awake.

[identity profile] pheebs1.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah this is excellent. Not only does SAM GET A HAIRCUT (to which hurrah) but haircuts are sexy!!!

Cool bursts of air trail warm hands down Sam’s neck, shoulders, back and chest. Stray hair tickles and flutters as Dean brushes them off Sam’s naked flesh; Sam tries to clear his thoughts while he brushes away the hair clinging to his shorts.

Dean’s hands flutter down Sam’s back lightly and Sam tries, and fails, not to still. His muscles tighten and heat floods his body, he can feel his stomach start to shake in that familiar and slightly uncomfortable way.


GULP!!

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so happy you liked this!

[identity profile] dev-earl.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm always having Dean cutting Sam's hair in my fics because I just love the imagery. Dean focusing and Sam staying still and hoping Dean isn't that cruel to be giving him a bad haircut just for fun. I wish I could have the skill to prolong it into a whole fic like this. Nice work! :D

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, I'mn glad you liked this!

[identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 05:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this. I was totally channeling Sam the whole time, because I have a thing about my hair/head, plus Dean! So yeah, very hot.

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 05:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked this!

[identity profile] particlesofgale.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 06:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Very powerful and subtly arousing. I felt like
an interloper reading this very private moment
between the boys. Great job! Thank you.

Debbie

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 06:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[identity profile] la-folle-allure.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I still think Hair Today, Gone Tomorrow was a better title *winks*

*Charlee love*! *claps and squees* Love it!

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! I'm still happy that you love it!

[identity profile] deirdre-c.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 08:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh. So sensual and lovely.

Sam’s tired, and cold. His body aches and his muscles are sore. He lets his head drop forward and doesn’t even try to cover the moan that slips out. Sam squeezes his eyes closed and his breathes come out in harsh pants as Dean’s fingers start to rub harder.

Very nice! :)

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[identity profile] wendy.livejournal.com 2006-11-26 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
Gorgeous imagery and helloooo sexy.

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-11-26 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you vcery much, I'm glad you liked it!

[identity profile] cocombat.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
I like this.

I like the sensuality, physicality, the UST.

I like the title, because it makes me think that Sam loses his (denial) inhibitions, along with his hair. I feel so very sorry for Sam in this, because when I think about it, those motions/feelings - hands stroking shaved head, down his back, well damn. Guh. So very hot. I mentioned sensual, yeah?
I like this because I can imagine that Sam has 'issues' and that that's why he grows his hair out, but only long enough to go in his eyes (there has to be a reason, right?). I like it because now I can pretend there's a little tension whenever Dean tells Sam to get a haircut. I like it because I can pretend there's a sequel, where Sam tells Dean he wants him to cut his hair, and Dean's nervous, and says 'Why don't you just go to a hair-dressers?', and Sam steps up to him, real close, and says, 'I want you to do it'. And then pretends that he was just walking over to their bags, and grabs the shaver. And then they just stare at each other, real slow. And Dean says, 'ok'.
And then this happens, again. Except there's sex this time. It's awesome, really it is.

That's why I like this.

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed this!

I also like your sequel right there pretty nicely. :P

[identity profile] deadflowerss.livejournal.com 2006-11-29 11:12 pm (UTC)(link)
This is pretty damn hot!
I'm very impressed with the tension you managed to achieve,and it had a very visual feel to it.
Fantastic.*adds to memories*

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2006-11-30 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[identity profile] winterwaltz6.livejournal.com 2007-01-28 07:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Um, WOW. You can write sexual tension so well, it's almost painful. This is so going in my memories. Excellent job!

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2007-01-29 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this story!

[identity profile] zooey-glass04.livejournal.com 2007-04-28 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Here via [livejournal.com profile] remix_redux. I love this so much. You manage to convey so much feeling in so few words. I love the vulnerability of Sam having his head shaved, and the care and consideration in how he does it. There's that easiness with each other that is so much a part of the brotherly relationship - Your other left - and yet you maintain the tension all the way through. Beautiful.

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2007-04-28 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, this story is really a special one to me. I wrote it for a friend's birthday and it's one of the few fics I've done that I actually kinda of like.

Thank you for all your kind words and I am so very happy that you enjoyed this!
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[personal profile] tabaqui 2007-05-03 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, oh oh.
I love all the little, shivery moments while Dean's cutting Sam's hair- all the tiny details and the growing tension. Just delicious!

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2007-05-03 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this!
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[identity profile] velvetine01.livejournal.com 2007-05-13 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
that was beautiful. there's so much tension, shame and tenderness in this fic, i can't help but love it.

just... ♥ :D

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2007-05-13 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this fic!

[identity profile] glimmerella.livejournal.com 2008-06-25 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*sniffle* Poor Sam. His hair is ... so damn sexy. :(

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2008-09-12 07:21 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it!

[identity profile] gilesgirl.livejournal.com 2008-07-15 05:58 am (UTC)(link)
Wow.

Too bad John walked in. ;)

[identity profile] clex_monkie89.livejournal.com 2008-09-12 07:32 am (UTC)(link)
I know, right? SO CLOSE, and yet so far.

[identity profile] gilesgirl.livejournal.com 2008-09-12 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
*G*

Yes! So very, very close...and yet... ;)
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[personal profile] cybel 2010-01-31 11:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I added a small podbook of Samson to the archive here.

:-)
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[personal profile] cybel 2010-01-31 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
My pleasure. :-)