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Okay, so these have been growing a little, random prezzies dropped here there and everywhere.

Wee!Winchesters was tailored for

miss_mandy
Snippet was tailored for

jewels667
Mary and Lunch Money were tailored for

jetpants

So I'm reading fic right? And I'm online and it's a fucked-up fic in a good way and I'm at this really angsty part and then my MSN pops up. And this happens:

Amanda says:
cleeeeeeex
Metallibabe Clex says:
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeees?
Amanda says:
write gen for meeeeeee

So I did. She wanted Wee!Winchesters with Dean crawling in Sammy's crib and trying to make him stop crying.

Title: Untitled Wee!Winchesters ficlet.
Status: Done
Rating: G
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Characters: Dean, Sam
Pairing: None
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Words: 497
Prompt/Summary: "Or maybe it's nighttime and it's one of the times Dean climbs in the crib."

Dean wakes up in the middle of the night with wet sheets and Daddy isn't there. Dean knows Daddy isn't there cause Daddy wakes up Dean and helps him change when he has an accident. But Daddy isn't there and so Dean has to change himself, but that's okay because he's a Big Boy now and he's almost old enough for school.

Dean climbs out of the bed and takes off his Big Boy Underwear, wet and sticky and cold, and pulls the blanket off the bed, leaving both on the floor in a dirty pile. Dean knows that Daddy keeps all their clothes in the big bag next to the bed, not the one by the door, so he looks through it until he finds some more of his underwear. He puts them on and grabs one of Daddy's big shirts and climbs back on the bed quietly.

Dean lays Daddy's shirt over the wet stain on the bed and climbs on it. He's too scared to sleep and he won't lie down so he just sits on the shirt and tries not to cry. He's afraid because Daddy isn't there and Daddy's always there and he wants his Mommy but he knows she went to heaven so he wants his Daddy cause Daddy makes everything better and he knows Auntie Katie is right down the hall but Auntie Katie isn't Daddy and she's not Mommy and-- And Sammy is crying now and nothing else matters.

Dean is up and off the bed and at Sammy's crib before the first wail is even done. He presses his face against the bars and reaches an arm through to pet Sammy's head like Mommy taught him to.

"It's okay Sammy," Dean whispers to him. Sammy stops crying but he's still sniffing like he's about to start again any second. Dean tries to shush him and make him go back to sleep but Sammy's eyes are all wet and face is all scrunched up and Dean knows what to do then.

It takes him a few minutes and he almost falls twice but Dean manages to climb up the dresser and into Sammy's new crib with him. He's very, very careful when he lies down next to the baby because he still remembers Mommy and Daddy telling him that babies break easy, even easier than the cups he's not allowed to use yet.

Sammy's eyes are still wet but he's not crying anymore, just making small hitching sounds and Dean knows that it's his job to take care of Sammy cause that's what big brothers do. Dean kisses Sammy's head and lays a hand on his chest and tells him that everything will be okay because he wont ever let anything happen to Sammy and that Daddy wont either. He tells him he doesn't have to be afraid right now because Daddy wont let the monsters come back, that Daddy will kill them all because that's what he does.

Title: Snippet
Rating: PG-13
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Characters: Dean, Sam
Pairing: None
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Words: 331
Prompt/Summary: ~~Julia~~ Dean hates Sam's hair.

Dean hates Sam's hair now. He hates that Sam has bangs because he thinks they looking fucking ridiculous and beyond that it's unsafe. They fall in his eyes and they don't stay back and Dean has actual, full-fledged, fucking nightmares where Sam's fucking bitch-bangs blind his aim just enough for Dean to watch some random demon tear his baby brother to bloody little bits and shreds.

The last time Sammy had bangs he was... six. He was six and Dean remembers this because he remembers Sammy getting licked all over by the Black Dog and the slobber all but gluing his hair into even more of a rat's nest than usual. Dad took scissors and a razor to Sammy's hair and for the next twelve years it never got longer than about an inch and a half in length.

Dean's tried to talk Sam into cutting his hair since the beginning of December and Sam's been refusing since the middle of November. Dean has tried every trick in the book; he's threatened to shave it (Which was followed by an identical threat from Sam), he's told him it makes him look like a bull-dyke (Sam said his "boobs" were too big, honest-to-God, he actually said boobs) and he's told him it makes him look faggy. That was only used the one time because Mr. P.C. College Boy don't like the "f" word and lectured him for almost an hour on the inherent homophobia of some stupid shit Dean'd never really cared about. The fucking queer-bait.

He almost told Sam about his... thing, with Sam possibly getting killed because he can't see. But then he realized that Sam would probably hide all of his bladed weapons before he could commit seppuku and restore his honor.

In the end Dean did the only thing he could do. He waited until Sam crashed from exhaustion, grabbed a handful of Sam's hair in his left hand, a pair of scissors in his right and cut.

Title: Mary
Rating: G
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Characters: Dean, Sam, John
Pairing: None
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Words: 245
Prompt/Summary: Gun = security blanket.

Dean's had Mary since he was seven. He named her the very day he got her but he doesn't mention her name anymore because he's seen Daddy's face and he doesn't like making him look like that.

Mary was a Colt .45 and the only thing that made him feel safe when Daddy was gone. He knew that as long as he had Mary with him it would be just like Mom was still there, he knew she would keep him and Sammy safe.

Dean wasn't allowed to keep Mary under his pillow because Dad always said that people get trigger-happy when they're sleepy and can't see straight, but he brought her with everywhere else.

Mary went with him on every hunt regardless of whether it required a gun or not, she went with him to diners and stores and gas stations and bars and she even went with him to school until that one time in Arkansas right after Columbine.

Sammy used to tease him that he was such a freak that he couldn't even have a stuffed animal like "normal" people. Dean hated school and made no bones about it, he also made no bones about the fact that he wouldn't mind school nearly as much if he weren't "naked."

From the day he got her Dean had never been parted from Mary for more than nine hours at a time.

Until Sammy left for Stanford and Dean snuck her in his bag.

Title: Lunch Money
Rating: G
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Characters: Dean, Sam, John
Pairing: None
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Words: 198
Prompt/Summary:

jetpants said something about how Dean was a great big brother and this came of it. Inspired by the flashback in Something Wicked.

Dean always sacrificed everything for Sammy, whether Sammy or John knew it or not.

When they would shop at Goodwill Dean would never spend more than ten dollars, no matter how many holes the clothes had or how gross the shirt looked, and always tried to talk Dad into getting Sammy a book or a backpack with the remaining money. Sometimes it even worked.

Dean can count the number of lunches he ate at school his entire life, homemade or bought, on one hand. He always packed Sammy a lunch with a sandwich and a soda (And a cookie if they had any) and took himself a paper bag stuffed with washcloths so it looked like he was eating too.

Once Sammy got old enough to ask/demand not to bring in lunch Dean started scamming and threatening kids for their lunch money so Sammy could have what he wanted. It worked for four years and was brought down on his head by one bitchy kid who ran and told the principal. Dean was suspended for "threatening a student," John took away his radio for two weeks and Sammy still never found out where his lunch money came from.

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He's afraid because Daddy isn't there and Daddy's always there and he wants his Mommy but he knows she went to heaven so he wants his Daddy cause Daddy makes everything better and he knows Auntie Katie is right down the hall but Auntie Katie isn't Daddy and she's not Mommy and-- And Sammy is crying now and nothing else matters. Okay, now you've got me crying at work.

All the fics were lovely but at the same time they hurt. Dean crawling into the crib with baby Sammy and ignoring his own pain, man, that made my chest ache.

And Dean naming his gun "Mary"? And that last line, From the day he got her Dean had never been parted from Mary for more than nine hours at a time. Until Sammy left for Stanford and Dean snuck her in his bag.

*sigh* Yeah, I loved that. :)

And I think the snippet of Dean trying to convince Sam to cut his bangs by using every reason except the real one was fantastic.

Really nice job. :)

Okay, now you've got me crying at work.

I'm sorry! But at the same time I'm kinda happy, y'know?

Dean crawling into the crib with baby Sammy and ignoring his own pain, man, that made my chest ache.

Even at four Dean was already on his way to the man he is now; he's sad and scared and wet but ignores it all the second Sammy shows any kind of discomfort.

And Dean naming his gun "Mary"? And that last line

The Going To College fics always have Dean slipping a knife in a bag or some money or something but I really see Dean slipping Sam whatever his security blanket is; because it's protected him for so long that he almost trusts it'll protect Sammy.

And I think the snippet of Dean trying to convince Sam to cut his bangs by using every reason except the real one was fantastic.

Cause you know he'd never actually tell him. Hell, the man would rather suffer Sam's Angry Wrath than let on that he's scared about something.

Really nice job. :)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed these!

There all really good and well written.

Lunch money is my favorite,you captured a realistic potrayal of their childhood,and I can just imagine Dean taking the other kids money for Sam.
Very nice.

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed these!

Dean would not see anything wrong at all with taking other kids' money for Sam, in part because in his mins Sam deserves everything ever and in part because it's not like he's doing it for fun. He's kinda like Robin Hood if you think about it long enough.

Oh, I'm glad you collected these into their own post (instead of leaving them orphaned in comments on other people's journals)!

I like the first one-- with Dean even knowing that killing monsters is what Daddy does, but still hating to have him gone.

The second one, though..
They fall in his eyes and they don't stay back and Dean has actual, full-fledged, fucking nightmares where Sam's fucking bitch-bangs
This cracked me up, this whole description, and the story as a whole. BUT... I seriously think Sam needs bangs and I don't get the huge fandom desire to cut them off. They could be tidier, for sure, and at or above the eyebrow. But still... Klingon-forehead-of-freakishness. Must be hidden.

I do love the lecture Sam gave Dean on homophobia, though, and how he would just wear Dean into the ground with it-- because that is so Sam. ;)

Oh, I'm glad you collected these into their own post (instead of leaving them orphaned in comments on other people's journals)!

jetpants' were done in her comments but Amanda and Julia's were done on MSN. I almost didn't repost these but then I realized that the Five Powers fic is taking a while and it's been totally too long since I've written anything.

I seriously think Sam needs bangs and I don't get the huge fandom desire to cut them off.

Me either honestly. I love my Sammich but he's got a totally fivehead and needs those bangs like WOAH. But Julia needed bribing and writing the haircutting kept her online. Besides, you know Dean completely hates Sam's bangs.

This cracked me up, this whole description, and the story as a whole.

I'm actually kinda proud of Dean's voice in that one; it came out a lot better than I thought it would.

I do love the lecture Sam gave Dean on homophobia, though, and how he would just wear Dean into the ground with it-- because that is so Sam. ;)

I can see him doing it too. Dean would of course always say things were gay or faggy or queer and Sam would start in on th lecture and it would always end with Dean scoffing and calling him a fag. Which would have Sam thumping his head against the seat/window and muttering about how big of an idiot his brother was.

Oh man, I missed these when they were first posted (and let me say I am very glad you decided to post them after all.) Wonderful little glimpses into Winchester life. I am just blown away at your ability to mix angst and humor without compromising the plot or the storyline.

That was only used the one time because Mr. P.C. College Boy don't like the "f" word and lectured him for almost an hour on the inherent homophobia of some stupid shit Dean'd never really cared about. The fucking queer-bait.

Sammy used to tease him that he was such a freak that he couldn't even have a stuffed animal like "normal" people.

Heh. :) Cause I'm in a weird mood and these made me giggle for a good long while. :D

Thank you so much! You've actually reminded me that I never bothered posting these to any comms. I think I might do that tonight.

I am just blown away at your ability to mix angst and humor without compromising the plot or the storyline.

Thank you! I try very hard not to break the flow of anything. Sometimes it's hard because you'll think of a line you really want to put in but if you do it'll disrupt the story.

they're all so beautifully sad. :') it makes my heart wibble. guh, you're fantastic.
i think my favorite part, though, out of all of them was the ending to mary. i just loved the idea of dean giving up his gun for sam. i don't know why but it just made me smile. teehee. x)

Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked them!

As for the ending to Mary it just seemed to me that if there was something that made Dean feel safe he'd hand it over to Sam in a heartbeat. Especially if Sam was going to college where Dean couldn't be there himself.

These ficlets were amazing. I'm honestly mesmerized by them. Great work.

Thank you! I'm very glad that you liked them!

i think the hair is my favorite one, because you just know dean and sam have had words about it, and sam would give dean a lecture about his un-pc-ness, and dean would cut sam's hair in the middle of the night just for his own peace of mind, because god forbid he ever let on to his brother that he's scared sam's gonna get hurt from not being able to see. but i'm with you and halfshellvenus - sam realllly needs bangs. he's fucking adorable but man, he's got the biggest forehead ever, it's a little scary.

"mary" made me snerk, tho - trust dean to have a security handgun instead of a security blanket. such a freak. (and i say that in the kindest possible way.)

he's fucking adorable but man, he's got the biggest forehead ever, it's a little scary

It's not even a fivehead; it's a sixhead. It's gigantic. He's like half conehead or something.

And? You know Dean never needed no blankets as long as he had his gun. Not the knife, but the gun, always the gun.

ohh my...that first one just made my day! Even if it did make me sniffle...beautifully written, and I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your stuff now! Well done!

Thank you very much, I'm glad that you liked enjoyed it!

love 'em all, but the hair one especially got me right there.

I'm glad you liked them!

Untitled fic

This had a great “Aww” factor. :)

Favorite lines:

Dean lays Daddy's shirt over the wet stain on the bed and climbs on it. He's too scared to sleep and he won't lie down so he just sits on the shirt and tries not to cry. He's afraid because Daddy isn't there and Daddy's always there and he wants his Mommy but he knows she went to heaven so he wants his Daddy cause Daddy makes everything better and he knows Auntie Katie is right down the hall but Auntie Katie isn't Daddy and she's not Mommy and-- And Sammy is crying now and nothing else matters.

I love Dean’s long train of thought here, and how he’s getting all worked up, and then one peep out of Sam and he’s fully in big brother mode. All together now: Aww!

Snippet

*snickers* Too funny about Dean finally cutting Sam’s hair while Sam sleeps.

Mary

This was a bittersweet idea, that Dean would use a gun in lieu of a security blanket or stuffed animal.

Favorite lines:

From the day he got her Dean had never been parted from Mary for more than nine hours at a time.

Until Sammy left for Stanford and Dean snuck her in his bag.

Aww. *pets Dean*

Lunch Money

Wow, the lengths Dean goes to in order to make sure Sam’s clothed and fed. And Sam never really realized it. *sniffle*

Thanks for writing these! I very much enjoyed them.

I love Dean’s long train of thought here, and how he’s getting all worked up, and then one peep out of Sam and he’s fully in big brother mode. All together now: Aww!

Dean has this switch in his brain, the second Sam[my] so much as hitches a breath anything Dean's got going on personally is completely ignored for His Sammy.

*snickers* Too funny about Dean finally cutting Sam’s hair while Sam sleeps.

You know that's how he'd do it too.

Aww. *pets Dean*

And you know that when Sam finally found her in the bag he probably spent a good fifteen minutes crying in a bathroom as everything hit him all at once.

And you know that when Sam finally found her in the bag he probably spent a good fifteen minutes crying in a bathroom as everything hit him all at once.

Good point. *pets Sam* *pets Dean again* *sneaks Dean away for some private time*

aw, its just so pretty! I actually have a tear that isn't from my injuried eye, which means that its a real one! Dean is such a kick ass big brother! I loved evertyhing about this. thanks for sharing with me, i hope that maybe you write more about the brothers and their lifes soon. They are just too cute!

Oh I totally plan on writing more about them very soon! And thank you so much for commenting, I'm glad you like these!

i loved them! and Let me know when you have more!

I totally will!

*sob*

yes i am reading through all your spn fics! sorry for the happy spamming!

loved them!

Feel free to spam away, I love knowing people like my stuff. :D

thanks for sharing!
'snippet' and 'lunch money' were so good at characterising protective!dean and i loved that you fit so much into such a tiny amount of words.

♥

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked these!

Jesus on a cracker that...those are...all amazing.

Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad you liked them.

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