I opened a tab with this when it was posted, and then let it languor. I'm not normally as interested in established relationships, because, as much as I like wincest, I have to be convinced that the Sam and Dean from a given story would take that step. So I put this to the back burner, and read through most of the other wincest fics from the comm, something like 500k words *eyes bleed*, and then I came back to this, because I absolutely think that the FBI subplot that they worked into the show is one of the best (if not the best) elements they've worked into the show, and I wanted to see how this played out.
And can I just say, *damn* me for putting it off? I loved this. I loved the way you wrote Henrickson, I loved that you used the spelling of his name that I do, I love the FBI peons that you worked in too (the guy at the Roadhouse *snicker*), the fact that the Sam/Dean is an extension of the SamandDean, and the multiple references (and the fact that you cited them all! the geek part of me is dancing with glee), I loved the way they were boys at all times, which is so essential to their characters, and you nailed it. I loved it all.
The little things, like the bit about Dean speaking Thermometer, the parent language of Toothbrush, and Sam wandering for days trying to find Dean, and then remembering that the system had changed, and so many others. All these made this story fantastic, instead of just good. I wanted this to go on forever, and I was totally satisfied with how it ended, which is the make of a great story, as far as I'm concerned.
I can only hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading it. :) *adds to memories*
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And can I just say, *damn* me for putting it off? I loved this. I loved the way you wrote Henrickson, I loved that you used the spelling of his name that I do, I love the FBI peons that you worked in too (the guy at the Roadhouse *snicker*), the fact that the Sam/Dean is an extension of the SamandDean, and the multiple references (and the fact that you cited them all! the geek part of me is dancing with glee), I loved the way they were boys at all times, which is so essential to their characters, and you nailed it. I loved it all.
The little things, like the bit about Dean speaking Thermometer, the parent language of Toothbrush, and Sam wandering for days trying to find Dean, and then remembering that the system had changed, and so many others. All these made this story fantastic, instead of just good. I wanted this to go on forever, and I was totally satisfied with how it ended, which is the make of a great story, as far as I'm concerned.
I can only hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading it. :) *adds to memories*