Beautiful fic. Absolutely breathtaking. Kudos, my dear, your writing is Brilliant. I wouldn't be able to narrow it down to any specific point in time that I thought was the most well thought out or descriptive or emotionally touching, because my comments would never end. In all, a wonderfully crafted piece of work that you should be nothing but proud of.

It's time you sit back and pat yourself on the back. Wonderful. :)

~Kaylie