Ah, *gah*, what heartbreak. You've done a really fantastic job right here and I think the fact that you have just got these snippets, but little passages that are so full of grief and longing and emotion--it's just perfect, the format and the language and the context.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the juxtaposition of the first and last passages "... says nothing." Oh, so wonderful. It works on so many levels.
They sleep in the truck that night, even though they have money for a room.
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I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the juxtaposition of the first and last passages "... says nothing." Oh, so wonderful. It works on so many levels.
They sleep in the truck that night, even though they have money for a room.
Aww, *sniffles*, the image!