ext_58545 ([identity profile] ferrynheit.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] clex_monkie89 2006-02-12 01:42 pm (UTC)

Yay, elaboration! I never commented on your other fic, Difference Between a Rule and Law (I think) *is ashamed* but I loved that one! It was so much fun to read!

And this... just wow. The imagery is delicious. :) And the intimacy behind it all is just so... *sigh* Okay, and I suddenly just pictured them in a hammock together... strange. Anyway, wonderfully done! I will steal this line too and say that it flowed really well. And it's got a bit of humor too! I love the infusion of humor into an otherwise humorless fic. And I don't mean humorless in any negative sense, just a fic that's in some other genre, like romance/suspense/action/etc. Whatever, I'm bad with words.

Oh, and I love your running descriptions of the tattoo. Did you study lots of pictures of shirtless!Michael for those parts? That sort of research is always fun! :)

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